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 ====== Divine-Royal Menagerie ======
-The Divine-Royal Menagerie is an official building located in The Terrace of the Hand That Crafts, more specifically right near the Destitution Gardens. This building is unique in its kind, as it houses a collection of exotic and even fantastic animals, gathered from all corners of the world by the God-King.
+The Divine-Royal Menagerie is an official building located in the Terrace of the Hand That Crafts, right next to the Destitution Gardens. This building is unique in its genre, as it houses a collection of exotic and even fantastic animals, gathered from all corners of the world by the God-King.
 Upon entering the Divine-Royal Menagerie, one is immediately struck by the spectacle of nature in all its diversity and splendor. Golden cages house birds with multicolored feathers, clear pools host strange marine creatures, secure enclosures contain impressive wild beasts.
-The building itself is an architectural marvel, with its high ceilings adorned with frescoes depicting scenes of animal life, its sculpted columns and its floor mosaics. Visitors can stroll through the paved alleys, admire the animals and listen to the explanations of the keepers.
+The building itself is an architectural marvel, with its high ceilings adorned with frescoes depicting scenes of animal life, its sculpted columns and its floor mosaics. Visitors can stroll through the paved alleys, admire the animals and listen to the explanations of their keepers.
-The Divine-Royal Menagerie is also a place of research and study for the scholars of Laelith. Laboratories and Libraries are set up in a wing of the building, where researchers can study the behaviors and characteristics of the animals.
+The Divine-Royal Menagerie is also a place of research and study for the scholars of Laelith. Laboratories and libraries are set up in a wing of the building, where researchers study the behaviors and characteristics of these animals.
 But the Divine-Royal Menagerie is not just a place of entertainment and science. It is also a symbol of the power and wealth of the God-King, who has managed to gather such a variety of animals in one place. That's why the Menagerie inspires awe and respect, contributing to the fame of Laelith.
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