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 ====== Former House of Noncetop the Timekeeper ======
-The Former House of Noncetop the Timekeeper is a private residence (although it belongs to the city's administration) located in the the Dispensation district, on the terrace of the Hand That Crafts, in Laelith. Its precise address is the ladder of Mercy, a lively and picturesque street lined with artisan workshops and craft shops.
+The former house of Noncetop the Timekeeper is a private residence (although it belongs to the city's administration) located in the Dispensation district, on the terrace of the Hand That Crafts, in Laelith. Its precise address is on the ladder of Mercy, a lively and picturesque street lined with artisan workshops and craft shops.
-This residence, with its typical Laelith architecture, stands out for its antique charm and rich history. It was once the home of Timekeeper Noncetop, an iconic figure of the city, known for his essential role in the temporal regulation of the city's activities. Today, although the Timekeeper doesn't longer lives in this world (though some debate the meaning of this term…), the house retains an aura of respect and mystery.
+This residence, with its typical Laelith architecture, stands out for its antique charm and rich history. It was once the home of Timekeeper Noncetop, an iconic figure of the city, known for his essential role in the temporal regulation of the city's activities. Today, although the Timekeeper no longer lives in this world (though some debate the meaning of this term…), the house retains an aura of respect and mystery.
-The building is constructed on two levels, with a red-tiled roof and white stone walls. The main entrance, framed by carved columns, opens onto a spacious hall. On the ground floor, there is a dining room, a library, and a kitchen. The upper floor houses the bedrooms and a bathroom. From each window, one can admire the view of the Dispensation district and the terrace of the Hand That Crafts. It's undoubtedly a comfortable residence. It's understandable that the right to reside there is granted by the royal-divine administration to the best servants of the God-King. It is less understandable that after a few months, these privileged individuals systematically find another residence that seems better suited to their activities.
+The building is constructed on two levels, with a red-tiled roof and white stone walls. The main entrance, framed by carved columns, opens onto a spacious hall. On the ground floor, there is a dining room, a library, and a kitchen. The upper floor houses the bedrooms and a bathroom. From each window, one can admire the view of the lively Dispensation district and the terrace of the Hand That Crafts. It's undoubtedly a comfortable residence. It's understandable that the right to reside there is granted by the royal-divine administration to the best servants of the God-King. It is less understandable that after a few months, these privileged individuals systematically find another residence that seems better suited to their activities.
-The former house of Timekeeper Noncetop is a place steeped in history, bearing witness to the prosperous past of Laelith. It is a symbol of the city's identity and culture, and a place of interest for all those who are interested in its history, heritage… and legends.
+The former house of Timekeeper Noncetop is a place steeped in history, bearing witness to the prosperous past of Laelith. It is a symbol of the city's identity and culture, and a place of interest for all those who are interested in Laelith's history, heritage… and legends.
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