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 ====== High Guild ======
-At the heart of the terrace of the Hand That Crafts, in the district of the Kingdoms, stands an imposing edifice of marble and porphyry: the High Guild Headquarters. Located on the Seven Kingdoms Circle, this majestic building is the nerve center of trade in Laelith.
+In the Kingdoms district in the heart of the terrace of the Hand that Crafts, stands an edifice of marble and porphyry: the High Guild Headquarters. Located on Seven Kingdoms Circle, this majestic building is the nerve center of trade in Laelith.
-The entrance to the headquarters is guarded by a concierge where visitors are required to deposit their weapons. Beyond, the guard post houses a Militia dedicated to the protection of the High Guild. The building is a labyrinth of rooms and corridors, housing offices, meeting rooms, and apartments reserved for the high dignitaries of the guild.
+The entrance to the headquarters is guarded by a concierge where visitors are asked to deposit their weapons. Beyond, the guard post houses a Militia dedicated to the protection of the High Guild. The building is a labyrinth of rooms and corridors, housing offices, meeting rooms, and apartments reserved for high dignitaries of the guild.
 The influence of the High Guild is omnipresent. Every week, the treasurers of the craftsmen and traders guilds meet here to discuss business, profits, and grievances. The decisions made within these walls have a direct impact on the economy of Laelith. It is said that the influence of the Guild extends even to the inhabitants of the Cloaque…
-The High Guild Headquarters is more than just a building. It is the beating heart of trade in Laelith, a symbol of power and prosperity. For many inhabitants of the city, it is respected on par with the Fourtemple Opera. Despite its austere appearance, the High Guild Headquarters is a place of life and movement, a crossroads where the destinies of many inhabitants of Laelith intersect.
+The High Guild Headquarters is more than just a building however. It is the beating heart of trade in Laelith, a symbol of the city's power and prosperity. For many inhabitants of the city, it deserves to be respected on par with the Fourtemple Opera. Despite its austere appearance, the High Guild Headquarters is a place of life and movement, a crossroads where the destinies of many inhabitants of Laelith intersect.
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