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 ====== The Fountains ======
-The Temple of the Silver Fish is certainly not the most imposing in the Holy City, but it is, by general consensus, the most pleasant. The entire atmosphere of the district reflects the peaceful character and serenity that characterize the priests of the silver-domed Temple.
+The Temple of the Silver Fish is certainly not the most imposing in the Holy City, but it is, by general consensus, the most pleasant. The entire atmosphere of the district reflects its peaceful character and the serenity that characterizes the priests of the silver-domed Temple.
-It is partly the numerous Fountains adorning the sumptuous gardens of the Temple, and partly those found throughout the district, that inspired its name.
+It is partly the numerous Fountains adorning its sumptuous gardens and partly those found throughout the district that inspired this district's name.
-The inhabitants of the district are priests of the Silver Fish, laypeople, and employees of the Temple, blessed pilgrims who have decided to halt their wanderings here for an indefinite period, and many workers and craftsmen from The Hand That Crafts who have found here a pleasant atmosphere... and rents lower than on the Terrace where they carry out their activity.
+The inhabitants of the district are priests of the Silver Fish, laypeople, and employees of the Temple, blessed pilgrims who have decided to halt their wanderings here for an indefinite period, and many workers and craftsmen from the Hand That Crafts who have found the atmosphere pleasant... and rents lower than on the terrace where they carry out their activity.
-Add a few cheap tavinns and dormitories and you will have a good idea of what makes this district so attractive. It is also in this interlacing of ladders that you will encounter the most members of the Utruz people.
+Add a few cheap tavinns and dormitories and you will have a good idea of what makes this district so attractive. It is also in this interlacing of ladders that you will encounter the greatest number of Utruz people.
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