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-====== The PhœNix ======
+====== The Phœnix ======
-A verdant, peaceful neighborhood if there ever was one, the place is well guarded by the guards, as it is the path taken by wealthy merchants and other respectable travelers to go from The Hand That Crafts to Altalith Marina. Everything is done to ensure their tranquility.
+A verdant, peaceful neighborhood if there ever was one, this place is well guarded by the guards, as it is the path taken by wealthy merchants and other respectable travelers to go from the Hand That Crafts to the Altalith Marina. Everything here is done to ensure their tranquility.
-Between the somewhat flashy luxury homes of the newly rich The Fishers who have succeeded, and the second homes with views of the nearby mountains and The Altaltih of the wealthy merchants of The Hand That Crafts, it is overall a quiet neighborhood. It has become far too expensive for the original inhabitants of The Lakeshoe, which sometimes arouses their bitterness.
+Between the somewhat flashy luxury homes of the newly rich fishers who have succeeded, and the second homes with views on the nearby mountains and the Altaltih of the wealthy merchants of the Hand That Crafts, it is overall a quiet neighborhood. It has become far too expensive for the original inhabitants of the Lakeshoe, which sometimes arouses their bitterness.
-In the beautiful season, concerts, plays from The Theater or extraordinary fireworks organized by the priests of the Temple of the Firebird, take place on the Phoenix Esplanade. Not to mention the annual military jousting tournament, pitting the City Contingent against the Protectors. Very beautiful spectacles, for idle people, often incapable of appreciating the singular beauty of these places.
+In the beautiful season, concerts, plays from the Theater and extraordinary fireworks organized by the priests of the Temple of the Firebird, take place on the Esplanade of the Phoenix. Not to mention the annual military jousting tournament, pitting the City Contingent against the Protectors. Very beautiful spectacles, for idle people, often incapable of appreciating the singular beauty of these places.
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