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--- en:laelith:lakeshoe:the-pontoons [2023/12/04 20:59] – Creation by Laelith Scribe api
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 The Pontoons, a village within the city, may be the safest place in The Lakeshoe.
-The population of the Rock lives and works on boats moored to the pontoons. The shops are floating, their owners balancing on these frail flat-bottomed skiffs stacks of handicrafts, souvenirs from The Holy City, breeding aquariums of traniecs, stoves, beer barrels, the workbenches of mother-of-pearl polishers, tattoo artists' workshops...
+The population of the Rock lives and works on boats moored to the pontoons. The shops are floating, their owners balancing on these frail flat-bottomed skiffs, stacks of handicrafts, souvenirs from The Holy City, breeding aquariums of traniecs, stoves, beer barrels, the workbenches of mother-of-pearl polishers, and some tattoo artists' workshops...
-From the outside, it's just an anarchic jumble of boats, floating restaurants, wooden platforms attached to an islet located in front of Laelith, a few cables from the Smugglers' Quay. But in fact, it is one of the city's attractions. People live off the bounty brought by visitors, gambling, bets, and the exploitation of the Lake Ear, a mollusk that only thrives here. In addition to its delicate flesh, cooked by some boat-restaurants, its shell provides exceptional mother-of-pearl, both for its varied colors and its resistance. Several renowned polishers live on The Pontoons.
+From the outside, it's just an anarchic jumble of boats, floating restaurants, wooden platforms attached to an islet located in front of Laelith, a couple of stone's throw away from Smugglers' Quay. But in fact, it is one of the city's main attractions. People live off the bounty brought by its visitors, gambling, bets, and the exploitation of the Lake Ear, a mollusk that only thrives here. In addition to its delicate flesh, cooked by some boat-restaurants, its shell provides exceptional mother-of-pearl, both for its varied colors and its resistance. Several renowned polishers live on the Pontoons.
-These mollusks are fluorescent. At night, the entire Rock becomes a navigation landmark.
+These mollusks are fluorescent. At night, the entire Rock becomes a navigational landmark.
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