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 ====== The Plumes ======
-An incessant flurry of winged creatures enlivens the sky of the northern Mist. Seen from the ground, many appear to have barely the wingspan of a humanoid, although once on the ground, they could devour a whole ox. Others eclipse the sun as they fly over the neighborhood, terrorizing groups of children who then imagine that a dragon is about to descend upon Laelith. All these sky creatures come to join the Plumes Port, the gateway for the wealthy and dignitaries heading to the divine Laelith.
+An incessant flurry of winged creatures enlivens the sky of the northern Mist. Seen from the ground, many appear to have barely the wingspan of a humanoid, although once on the ground, they could devour a whole ox. Others eclipse the sun as they fly over the neighborhood, terrorizing groups of children who then imagine that a dragon is about to descend upon Laelith. All these sky creatures come to land in Plumes Port, the gateway for the wealthy and other flying dignitaries heading to the divine Laelith.
-But that's not the only attraction. In response to the Finders Market where everything is sold, or almost everything, the Rumors Market is an unusual place where only words are sold, turning the wildest rumors into indisputable truths. And these words spread throughout the neighborhood, jumping from ear to ear. And without even having the idea of listening to them, it is the words of the traveler that find themselves in their path and carry them along.
+But that's not the only attraction. In response to Finders Market where everything, or almost everything, is sold, Rumors Market is an unusual place where only words are sold, turning the wildest rumors into indisputable truths. And these words soon spread throughout the neighborhood, jumping from ear to ear. And without even having the idea of listening to them, these words jump into the ears of the traveler's that find themselves in their path, and carry them along.
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