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 ====== Merchants Guild ======
-The Merchants Guild is an imposing building located in The Puppet district, on The Prosperity Terrace, in Laelith. This building, at the heart of the city's commercial activity, is a true symbol of Laelith's economic influence. It is made up of complex architecture, with full arches, sculpted columns, and Walls adorned with frescoes depicting scenes of commerce.
+The Merchants Guild is a grand building located in the Puppet district, on the Prosperity Terrace in Laelith. This building, at the heart of the city's commercial activity, is a true symbol of Laelith's economic influence. Its opulent architecture, with full arches, sculpted columns and walls adorned with frescoes depicting scenes of commerce matches the wealth that assembles behind its doors.
-Inside, the atmosphere is lively with merchants, traders, and craftsmen coming to discuss, negotiate, and exchange. There are also Offices where traveling merchants declare their goods to the High Guild, and meeting rooms where the conclaves of the Guild are held.
+Inside, the atmosphere is lively with merchants, traders, and craftsmen coming to discuss, negotiate, and exchange. There are offices, of course, where traveling merchants declare their goods to the High Guild, and meeting rooms where the conclaves of the Guild are held.
-The Merchants Guild is also the place where recommended prices for goods sold in the city are set. Merchants who do not respect these recommendations expose themselves to heavy fines or confiscation of their goods.
+The Merchants Guild is also the place where recommended prices for goods sold in the city are set. Merchants who do not respect these recommendations expose themselves to heavy fines or the confiscation of their goods.
 In addition to its economic role, the Merchants Guild also plays an important cultural role. It indeed houses a collection of art objects and crafts, testifying to the craftsmanship of Laelith's artisans.
-In summary, the Merchants Guild is a must-visit place for any self-respecting merchant, a place where commerce, negotiations, and culture mix, at the heart of the vibrant city of Laelith.
+In summary, the Merchants Guild is a must-see for any self-respecting merchant, a place where commerce, negotiations, and culture mix, at the heart of the vibrant city of Laelith.
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