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 ====== Windowless Tavinn ======
-In the heart of the the Dispensation district, on the terrace of the Hand That Crafts, the Windowless Tavinn is a place as mysterious as it is fascinating. Accessible by a staircase that descends to a hideout wedged between the terrace and the Cloaque, this tavinn is a refuge for a diverse clientele of rogues, bandits, smugglers, mercenaries… and intelligent creatures from the depths.
+In the heart of the the Dispensation district, on the terrace of the Hand That Crafts, the Windowless Tavinn is a place as mysterious as its visitors. Accessible by a staircase that descends into a hideout wedged between the terrace and the Cloaque, this tavinn is a refuge for a diverse clientele of rogues, bandits, smugglers, mercenaries… and intelligent creatures from the depths.
-Its enigmatic name simply comes from its unique architectural design: being underground, it has no windows. Its single door opens to a blind space where daylight never penetrates. It is a place of absolute neutrality, where enemies and allies can meet safely, as long as they respect the golden rule: all physical or magical confrontations are strictly prohibited.
+Its enigmatic name simply comes from its unique architectural design: being underground, it has no windows. Its single door opens to a blind space where daylight never penetrates. It is a place of absolute neutrality, where enemies and allies can meet safely, as long as they respect the golden rule: all physical and magical confrontations are strictly prohibited.
-At the helm of the Windowless Tavinn is Illida, a stunning woman with seemingly eternal youth, whose origin remains a mystery. With the help of Gord and Sord, massive half-ogre and half-orc, she ensures the rules are followed. Offenders are expelled, with or without leniency – disappearing without a trace can be considered a form of expulsion.
+At the helm of the Windowless Tavinn is Illida, a stunning woman with seemingly eternal youth, whose origin remains a mystery. With the help of Gord and Sord, two massive half-ogre and half-orc, she ensures the rules are followed. Offenders are expelled, with or without leniency – disappearing without a trace being considered a form of expulsion.
-The Windowless Tavinn is a characteristic place of Laelith, if not the most recommendable of all… In this shadowy hideout where dark intrigues and improbable alliances are woven, every visitor can feel the heartbeat of the city – not forgetting to exercise elemental caution so that once out of the Tavinn, their own heart continues to beat…
+The Windowless Tavinn is a place typical of Laelith, if not the most recommendable of all… In this shadowy hideout where dark intrigues and improbable alliances are woven, every visitor can feel the heartbeat of the city – not forgetting to exercise elementary caution so that once out of the Tavinn, their own heart continues to beat…
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